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Post by Yuki on May 30, 2018 4:39:34 GMT -5
Move Name: Cryo Cryo: Ice storm Rank: 1 Type: Attack Range: Devil Fruit, up to 25 meter diameter. Cooldown: 1 Stamina Cost: 10 Description: Yuki creates a storm made of snow and ice particles in the air to attack her opponent(s) from multiple directions. The move is performed with Yuki in the center of it, and the range of it is stationary. This move lasts the turn it is used. This move can potentially damage Yuki's allies as well as her enemies if she isn't careful. Move Name: Cryo Cryo: Ice blade Rank: 1 Type: Attack Range: Not a ranged attack Cooldown: 1 Stamina Cost: 10 Description: Yuki creates a weapon made out of ice that she can attack her opponent(s) with. The weapon made is either a sword or a staff. Once the weapon is created, it only exists for duration of the post it is created in and then melts away. The weapon is 40 inches long.
Move Name: Cryo Cryo: Ice wall
Rank: 1
Type: Defense
Cooldown: 1
Stamina Cost: 10
Description: Yuki creates a wall made out of ice that shields her and her allies from enemy attacks. The wall is 12.5 meters wide and 12.5 meters tall.
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Post by Admin on May 30, 2018 16:39:50 GMT -5
Great Moves, though, we need to change a bit. Here we go! - For Ice Storm's Range, it needs to be changed to a 25 meter diameter. Then the Description should say that when the Move is performed, it is performed with the user at the center and that its diameter Range is stationary upon being performed. Also, lastly, just add that this Move lasts the turn it is used. Keep in mind that if this Move is used around allies, they can potentially be damaged by this Move.
- For Ice Blade, simply add the dimensions of it and also add what type of weapon that it makes. Be sure to also put in this Move's Description that it lasts for the post it is created and melts once that post it is over.
- Now to Ice Wall, add the height and width of the Move and you're good to go.
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Post by Yuki on May 30, 2018 16:59:12 GMT -5
Ice storm does have a 25 meter range.
I'll fix the rest tomorrow.
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Post by Yuki on May 31, 2018 8:51:44 GMT -5
And updated.
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Post by Admin on May 31, 2018 16:23:33 GMT -5
One last thing, I need you to scale down your Ice Wall considerably to somewhere in the 1-25 Meter Range cause 157 feet wide is far too wide and 110 feet is far too tall for a Rookie Movie. I hope you understand. Anyway, instead, can you make your Ice Wall 12.5 Meters Tall and 12.5 Meters wide? Thank you for your patience, Yuki!
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Post by Yuki on May 31, 2018 16:32:21 GMT -5
Okay, done.
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Post by Admin on May 31, 2018 16:40:14 GMT -5
APPROVED! IF THE ENDLESS DREAM GUIDES YOUR RESTLESS SPIRIT, SEIZE IT!
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