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Post by Locke on Jul 7, 2018 0:12:01 GMT -5
Wing Beat Rank: Rookie Type: Attack Range: Melee Requirements and Drawbacks: Having her fans. Cooldown: 1 turn Stamina Cost: 10 Description: A full powered strike as she uses the fans as a blade, slashing across the single foe in a X pattern.[/div] Papilion Spin Rank: Rookie Type: Attack Range: Melee Requirements and Drawbacks: Her fan is required to do this move. Cooldown: 1 turn Stamina Cost: 10 Description: Locke spins on a heel, fan-blades stretched out, as she strikes each foe twice, and pushes them back about 5 feet. Wing Toss Rank: Rookie Type: Attack Range: 25 feet Requirements and Drawbacks: Requires a weapon Cooldown: 1 turn Stamina Cost: 10 Description: A quick toss, of either a throwing knife, or one of her fans, stretched out to be a throwing weapon, aimed for a single foe. Thorax Block Rank: Rookie Type: Defense Range: Melee Requirements and Drawbacks: They need a weapon, of any sort... Cooldown: 1 turns Stamina Cost: 10 Description: Seeing a melee strike incoming, she uses her weapon to block the blow, ignoring one Rookie melee attack dealt to her.
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Post by Hina on Jul 7, 2018 0:44:35 GMT -5
Almost clean through. The "Requirements and Drawbacks" can be tuned a touch, though. Wing beat should require having access to your fan.
Papilion Spin doesn't need the dizzy, but if you want to keep it in for flavor, that's your choice.
Wing Toss should just say to require a weapon (saying "has no requirements EXCEPT..." is self-defeating and contradictory).
Thorax Block doesn't have to break your weapon, there aren't definitive rules for destroying equipment so i'd just leave that out. Additionally, "reduce damage by one rank" isn't how blocking works. A Rookie rank defensive move will block a rookie ranks move worth of damage, a Journeyman Defense will block a journeyman move worth of damage. Just knocking it down a rank comes out to the same (blocks 1 rank of damage cause Rookie is first rank) by reducing damage by a Rookie rank, but higher level defenses will block more damage. Just change it to "blocks Rookie Rank of Damage" or something along those lines in your own words.
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Post by Hina on Jul 7, 2018 1:16:21 GMT -5
Good. Approved.
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