Locke's renewed Moves

Almost clean through. The "Requirements and Drawbacks" can be tuned a touch, though.
Wing beat should require having access to your fan.

Papilion Spin doesn't need the dizzy, but if you want to keep it in for flavor, that's your choice.

Wing Toss should just say to require a weapon (saying "has no requirements EXCEPT..." is self-defeating and contradictory).

Thorax Block doesn't have to break your weapon, there aren't definitive rules for destroying equipment so i'd just leave that out. Additionally, "reduce damage by one rank" isn't how blocking works. A Rookie rank defensive move will block a rookie ranks move worth of damage, a Journeyman Defense will block a journeyman move worth of damage. Just knocking it down a rank comes out to the same (blocks 1 rank of damage cause Rookie is first rank) by reducing damage by a Rookie rank, but higher level defenses will block more damage. Just change it to "blocks Rookie Rank of Damage" or something along those lines in your own words.