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Post by Juana Fisher on Jul 8, 2018 14:38:07 GMT -5
DEVIL FRUIT Name: Bara Bara no Mi. (Split Split Fruit) Type: Devil Fruit Type Subtype: Bodily Transformation. DESCRIPTION Base Power: The fruit allows the user to turn into a splitting human. This allows the user to become immune to slashing attacks, due to the user splitting their own body into pieces with three-dimensional telekinetic control over those pieces. Said pieces are able to float within an area of influence from their feet. Rookie Devil Fruit: The user has a 25-meter range over where the pieces can be moved. The user is able to split for one post before falling back into place. Junior Devil Fruit: User is able to stay split for two rounds after a move. Journeyman Devil Fruit: User is able to stay split for three rounds after a move. Expert Devil Fruit: User is able to stay split for four rounds after a move. Master Devil Fruit: The user is now able to cover a more considerable distance while splitting, with a fifty-meter range around their feet. Weaknesses: Standard Devil Fruit Weaknesses. When a user falls out of their influence range, they lose control (which fall to the ground uselessly) of their body parts, and they must be placed within the area of influence to gain control again. The user's feet must stay (RELATIVELY) grounded so they can move like regular feet, they can not float like the rest of the body.
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Hihyō Hihyō no Mi
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Post by Zadi on Jul 9, 2018 1:47:25 GMT -5
Thread's Title - take the WIP out, please.
Type - The DF type is Paramecia.
Base Power - So for the "slashing immunity", I want you to specify the immunity exists BECAUSE the user can split their own body parts (so change "as well as" to "because the user can"). Also replace the word "parts" to "pieces" as well as changing "full control" to "three dimensional telekinetic control". Full control implies you can do more than move your body pieces.
Rookie - 25 meter range. Also mention the duration here; 1 posting round the user's body is able to stay split after a move.
Junior - Same as before; mention what the duration does for this Devil Fruit - 2 posting rounds the user's body is able to stay split after a move.
Journeyman/Expert/Master - Same as Junior.
Weaknesses - Instead of "seastone" put "Standard Devil Fruit weaknesses." For "leaving their area of influence" I want you to elaborate; what happens when the body parts are forced out of the area of influence? Also, mention the user's feet must stay relatively grounded and that they can move like regular feet but are unable to float around like the rest of the user's body.
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Sorry for the nitpicking, but I want to make sure this Devil Fruit is described properly.
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Hihyō Hihyō no Mi
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Post by Zadi on Jul 9, 2018 11:21:21 GMT -5
Approved~
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