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Kage Kage no Mi
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Post by Jacob Winters on Jul 19, 2018 20:53:08 GMT -5
DEVIL FRUIT Name: Kage Kage no Mi Type: Paramecia Subtype: Manipulation DESCRIPTION Base Power: The Kage Kage no Mi (Shadow Shadow Fruit) turns the user into a Shadow Human capable of manipulating and solidifying their shadow for various purposes. Rookie Devil Fruit: +25 meter range, allowing the user's manipulated shadows to exist within 25 meters from the user, for a total of 25 meters. Junior Devil Fruit: +25 meter range, allowing the user's manipulated shadows to exist within another 25 meters from the user, for a total of 50 meters. Journeyman Devil Fruit: +25 meter range, allowing the user's manipulated shadows to exist within another 25 meters from the user, for a total of 75 meters. Expert Devil Fruit: +25 meter range, allowing the user's manipulated shadows to exist within another 25 meters from the user, for a total of 100 meters. Master Devil Fruit: +1 post duration, allowing the user's manipulated shadows to exist for one extra turn than usual. Weaknesses: The fruit's abilities are negated by Seastone and sea water, and the user's innate shadow can be nullified by a specific source of light aimed at the correct angle. All standard Devil Fruit weaknesses also apply.
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Hihyō Hihyō no Mi
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Post by Zadi on Jul 20, 2018 20:45:40 GMT -5
Mostly good - just a couple edits to be made for clarity;
All Ranks - Instead of "user's created shadows", say "user's manipulated shadow". This Devil Fruit is a Manipulation type after all.
Weakness - Add in "Standard Devil Fruit weaknesses."
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Hihyō Hihyō no Mi
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Post by Zadi on Jul 20, 2018 20:50:12 GMT -5
Approved~
Thank you for submitting a Devil Fruit (still requires a registered Talent in order to eat a Devil Fruit)
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