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Post by Hayato Smoot on Jul 20, 2018 14:29:38 GMT -5
Hiten Mitsurugi-ryū Category: Blunt Theme: One Sword Special Effect: Bonus: +1 rank speed Hiten Mitsurugi-ryū is designed to take on multiple people at once. This style is highly focused on the users speed and if they can accurately predict what the opponents next move is. This Style forces the user to Put there sword. Few Pick up this style because of the possibility of self harm caused by this style's abilitys Rookie Style: At this phase Hayatos lack of finesse in this style severely Limits his arsenal. He relies heavily on overwhelming his opponents so he can get past there defenses. He Often passes up good chances to attack because of his lack of confidence in his abilitys. Junior Style: Clear improvement has been made since Hayato Started Training he has learnt a skill called Shinsoku also known as 'God Speed' allowing him to move at a accelerated speed which his main applications is getting in cheap hits quicker. Shinsoku is similar to Soru Journeyman Style: Hayato's Reaction speed has improved greatly now allowing him to react to attacks by using the sheath to his sword like a shield allowing a bit of defense. He has realized that overwhelming his opponent is extremely tiring and not what this style is for and decides to rather guess how his opponents going to attack and uses his speed to work around it. He develops another rokushinki like skill which has a skill that uses aspects from Geppo Expert Style: Hayato can now can move faster than the human eye without Shinsoku and he from the intense training is extremely strong beyond Human Strength. He Can easily avoid attacks coming from any angle and can counter from most positions. He uses his speed now to attack his enemys blind spots due to the constant sheathing of his sword Master Style: Hayato has Mastered the style and has became extremely proficient with all the moves he can use and has unlocked another rokushinki like skill which is like rankyaku. His Speed and Power makes him a extremely dangerous person even with a dull blade. |
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Post by Hina on Jul 21, 2018 12:04:00 GMT -5
You know, you don't need to be a "wind" special effect to do ranged "slash attacks"? Just checking, cause we've seen a lot of people pick "wind" assuming that's how it works. Further, danger to oneself via style may be acceptable as fluff but it should not be part of the scaling per rank. The scaling itself should describe the mastery over the style and how they in general fight with it. Especially starting on Junior Rank and above, it should also describe how the Special Effect comes into play specifically. Moves have no place in Rank descriptions either, you'll do them separately. Feel free to look through some of the Approved Styles to get a feel for how you can progress your ranks. |
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Post by Hayato Smoot on Jul 22, 2018 8:27:18 GMT -5
About the wind for range i did not know that i just assumed you would've needed it. Edited it
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Post by Hina on Jul 22, 2018 9:24:24 GMT -5
You can still have a different special effect as opposed to none, but i can't force you to not sell yourself short of things you're allowed to have. If you decide to add a special effect (does no't have to be 'elemental', even) of any kind, also add to the applicable ranks, what it's usage is.
This so called God Speed doesn't really work as it stands. You can have one Rokushiki imitating skill at Junior Rank and another at Journeyman and a Third at Master. You have to mention that you have access to it within the description of the Rank/s, but more then that and noting that it's a skill similar to "Rokushiki Tech X" doesn't need to be, as you will have to apply it as a move later which is when specifics will be described. Since its assumedly a Rokushiki-like, it also can't really scale in the way it's described.
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Post by Hayato Smoot on Jul 22, 2018 22:45:21 GMT -5
Im fine without a special effect it just wouldnt fit in that well with the rest of it but thank you anyway
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Post by Hina on Jul 23, 2018 11:52:06 GMT -5
You can't really have a Soru-like move twice, for one thing. The other being that "clairvoyance for where the enemy strikes" can be fluff at best, cause that is basically the most mastered version of Observation Haki we've seen in canon currently.
Additionally, the Descriptions for Junior and Journeyman are ok, everything else could be beefed out a little more to describe what exactly makes a User of this style unnique in their fighting. And the description does not really match up with what the Ranks are described like, i.E. it says taking on multiple enemies while the ranks focus more on quick strikes.
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Post by Hayato Smoot on Jul 24, 2018 23:08:45 GMT -5
The idea of the style is too avoid many attacks at once and counter quickly i didnt explain it that well i put some more detail of that into expert
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Post by Admin on Jul 25, 2018 20:36:32 GMT -5
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