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Post by Hageshī Freya on Sept 30, 2018 6:04:24 GMT -5
Name:Jūryoku Jūryoku no mi (Gravity Gravity fruit)
Basic Ability:the Jūryoku Jūryoku no mi grants the eater the ability to manipulate gravity around a chosen location at will by sending gravitational forces. These Gravitational forces can be used to manipulate areas of gravity making it strong or light gravity.
Rookie Devil Fruit: +25 meter range allows the user to Manipulate Gravitational Forces that can reach 25m from the user
Junior Devil Fruit: +1 post duration allows the user's Manipulated Gravitational Force to last one more post for a total of 2 posts
Journeyman Devil Fruit: +25 meter range allows the user to Manipulate Gravitational Forces that can reach 50m from the user
Expert Devil Fruit: +1 post duration allows the user's Manipulated Gravitational Force to last one more post for a total of 3 posts
Master Devil Fruit: +25 meter range allows the user to Manipulate Gravitational Forces that can reach 75m from the user
Weaknesses:The standard Devil Fruit weaknesses apply.
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The Pirate King
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Post by Admin on Oct 1, 2018 22:22:16 GMT -5
It appears you state that the Devil Fruit both PRODUCES and MANIPULATES, the Devil Fruit that Issho Fujitora has looked as if it manipulates gravity more so than produce, remove instances of produce and generate and replace with manipulating.
Also, the latter weakness you stated is not canon, so it does not need to be listed, meaning you can remove it.
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The Pirate King
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Monkey Boy
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Master Rank
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Post by Admin on Oct 1, 2018 22:31:08 GMT -5
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